Sunday, August 3, 2008

before bedtime

they ate my head
and swallowed my time
and made a lot of noise
that felt like whines
am not even trying to rhyme
this ridiculous drag
the weird old hag
visited me today
they cooked a big meal
and we ate our fill
and chewed the cud
like ruminating cows
my little mind fluttered
as my tiny mouth muttered
to see the end
the endless wait for silence
and hence
when it was done
all of them gone
and my drenched body alone
i thought if it was real
then it sunk in
it always takes time
(yes i cant make this rhyme)
my off day
went rather well
do i rhyme this with hell?
but its over
never did i think it will be
unsociable animal,that's me
my head is chopped in half
but still i sigh and laugh


Prospephone said...

Seemed like your were on a emotional cleansing exercise! Am I right? And by the way, my post did coe from a lot of negetivity- just responses to things going on around me these past weeks. I was really pissed.

Riya Das said...

hm u r right...and hope u r ok now

Indrajit Dutta said...

Hey this is witty alright in a dry manner.I mean that as a compliment.

Mallikarjuna said...

Good blog too

lalit said...

Thanks for the comment, This one was nice.....keep it up,keep in touch.